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the instruction are. that is the teacher feedback that i have to fix
I like the opening line (to keep in the intro), but make sure to include a hook as well.
The thesis is almost there! Work on clarity~
You’ve included a lot of great details. Make sure to bring the focus from plot summary to proving the theme is the intended message.
You refer to Joel as Barish but to Clementine by her first name
This is a bit on the long side (4 pages is what I’m really looking for), and I think if you remove some of the superfluous plot summary, you can pare it down a bit. Great start!