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I summited this paper but it was wrong. I need it to be looked over and improved on. This outline is about the way historians have changed the way they write about mental health. this is not a research paper. it is a paper focused on the way the views of the historians and writers have changes the way they have wrote and documented mental health.
This is what my teacher had to say about the first outline I turned in. please read this and take her advise about fixing it. You seem to still be struggling with the thesis – your argument is about the nature of care over time. But your argument should be about the scholarly discussion about the care. It can be hard to wrap your mind around the fact that this is a literature review not a research paper. So your thesis needs to be about the scholarship not the subject. For example someone studying slavery might argue – Early works about slavery were very racist and based almost exclusively on the writings of slave owners. By the 1970s however scholars had started to look at new sources that allowed them to write about slavery from a slave perspective so that modern literature is more balanced and less racist.
Do you see how that is about the literature? What would the equivalent be for you? Your sources are all quite recent so I am not sure you will find a major change over time in the studies but is there something else.
Finally that takes me to the question of why are the articles you look at in the order you are looking at them? What is the logic? Why start with Roberts? then go to Killaspy? The arrangement isn’t chronological – so what is it? The goal of this assignment is to think that through – figure out your organization and argument. I hesitate to grade this because maybe you want to try once more?
Your citations are not all in the same format and your Stanwell-Smith citation is incomplete.
I am going to attach the old outline that is wrong and see if you are able to fix it. I am also going to attach an annotative bibliography and book reviews for you to use when fixing the outline. if you need to add additional information from other credible sources that is fine just please cite them. I need this outline to be in Chicago format. please cite anything used in the outline.
when creating the thesis for this outline and future paper please remember its not about the information on mental illness but about the way historians have changed the way they look at it and write about it.